A while back I posted the beginning of a story that I had been working on years ago. I never edited to updted it, so that readers could see how my writing was back then compared to now. However, I'm going to use that same story for the first chapter or two of my Young Adult novel for my Writing Children's Literature class. At the moment I don't have anything written, but I do have a snippet of dialogue that I had to do for an assignment. It's not much, but hey, it might be of some interest.
“So, you are my niece.” the bird-faced woman said as she
circled around Arica.
“Yes. Your sister’s daughter.” Arica replied wearily and
craned her neck around to follow her aunt’s movements.
“You said your name is Arica? Such a commoner’s name.” she
scoffed. “And look at you. You look like you just climbed out of a pig sty.”
Arica looked down at her plain blue dress and slumped her
shoulders. “I have not had time to wash up yet.”
“Oh, do not do that.” her aunt tapped Arica on the shoulder
and the girl straightened back up. “You are not living on your parents’ farm
anymore. You will have to learn to be a lady.”
Arica nodded and shifted uncomfortably as her aunt stepped
back to inspect her.
“You are very tall.” the woman commented. “No man wants to
marry a woman who is taller than him. It will be hard to find you a husband.”
“Husband?” Arica squawked. “I don’t want to get married. I’m
only fif-“
“Quiet. Your voice irritates me.”
Although she looked insulted, Arica shut her mouth.
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