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Friday 8 March 2013

Poison Song

((I posted this same story about a month ago, maybe longer, but I've re-written the first couple chapters for my Writing Children's Literature class. The chapters are very short, as it's meant for young adults on the younger side. For now I'll just post the first chapter, since both together make eight pages on Word, and I don't want to post that much.))


Her parents were dead and she had never met her new family. He aunt and uncle had reluctantly accepted to take her in upon hearing she had been orphaned, but her mother had not talked to her sister and brother-in-law for many years. Arica had heard stories of them, how they had made their fortune breeding and raising horses, while her own family had struggled to make a living in the muddy soil of their farm.
                “Annette,” her mother would say with revulsion, “never cared much for others. She probably keeps her husband on a shorter rein than a willful filly. Don’t expect her to help us out when we need it most.”
                And yet, Arica now found herself depending on them for more help than she had ever expected. They sent a carriage to fetch her from the train station early that morning, and she had been travelling for half the day. As the sky started to darken, she shifted in the seat, trying to get comfortable with the gentle rocking of the carriage.

                Arica opened her eyes to find herself in a wide clearing, standing upon an old stump slimy with age. Movement caught her attention and she looked up. The sky appeared to be boiling with fire, the flames sluggishly twisting and rolling around each other. As she watched, the flames died down and began to retreat to one side of the sky, until they had set like the sun. With them went the light, until a new one sprang up to her left. It revealed a pale face, devoid of all details except two black eyes that seemed to move separately from the swaying of the figure. Arica screamed and stepped back, making her foot slip off the edge of the stump. She hit the ground hard, then scrambled back until her back hit the wood. Another light appeared across the clearing, with the same hauntingly empty face. More and more lights blinked into existence until Arica was surrounded by the ghostly creatures. They swayed as if in a breeze, but otherwise didn’t move, until one of them stepped forward and bent down to look closer at Arica. She shivered and started to close her eyes, because she noticed this one was different. It had long silvery hair, and raised a hand to pull at its face. It came off like a mask, and underneath was the face of her mother, swollen with death and with the same black eyes as all the others. She opened her blue lips, and a low wail came out. The mask dropped from her hands as she raised her arm to point behind her, into the darkness of the surrounding forest.

                Arica woke up with the image still in mind and a sheen of sweat on her brow. She could almost see his mother pointing in the direction the carriage was taking her now. From the widow she could see her new home.

                The carriage stopped outside the house just as the sun disappeared behind it. Upon the front steps stood a couple; a bird-like woman and a pudgy man, both dressed as if preparing to attend a formal event. As she climbed from the carriage, Arica looked down at her simple blue dress. It was stained with mud from working on the farm only days ago, and the fabric was fraying around the hem and elbows. Even her golden hair dimmed in comparison to the necklace of gold and diamonds her aunt wore around her thin neck.
                “So, you are my niece.” The woman even sounded like a bird with her shrill voice.
                Arica politely nodded as she approached the couple. “Yes, I’m Claire’s daughter.”
                “I can see her in you. You both have that… naive look.” Annette scowled before turning to lead the way into the house, with Arica tailing after. Behind them a couple servants grabbed Arica’s belongings to haul it up to her room.
                Inside the house, a grand marble staircase curved up toward the second floor. The servants brushed past her to bring the trunks up them, but Arica paused to admire the luxury. A crystal chandelier hung almost low enough for one to be able to reach out and touch it from the stairs.
                “Stop ogling the light fixture, girl,” Annette snapped.
                When Arica turned to face her, she thought she saw a white figure standing to her side for just a moment. The figure vanished so quickly that Arica was convinced it was just a play of lights, but more movement in the doorway behind her aunt made her doubt. She was told it was an old house; perhaps it could be true what people said about ghosts.
                “I’m sorry, I’m just, uh… tired,” Arica replied distractedly as she tilted her head slightly, trying to see into the room where the figure had appeared. A disapproving look from Annette brought Arica’s attention back to the woman. “Can I go to my room now?”
                “May I,” Annette corrected her. “It’s the second door to the right of the landing.” She gestured toward the stairs as she turned to enter the room where the figure had been.
               
                That night Arica found herself in the same clearing as before, this time standing at the edge. Upon the stump sat the figure with her mother’s face, the mask in her hand. When she saw Arica, she placed the mask back on and stood up.
                “Arica.” Its voice sounded like the wind. “You must find it. Do not let her have it.”
                “Ma? What do you mean? Who are you talking about?” Arica stepped forward, but the figure glided back, keeping the same distance between them.
                “She has forsaken half her bloodline. Only you can find it. Do not let her have it,” it continued as it drifted farther away
                “Ma! What do I have to find?” Arica cried and began to run after it. As soon as she was within reach, it vanished. “Why are you leaving me alone again?” she whispered.

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